title is self explanatory.
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Hey, this is good!! I can’t wait to read more!
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Thanks! you will be proud that I made sure that is wasn’t already a RP 
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Actually, this is the first of it’s kind! I like it! Is it an open of closed RP?
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open Role play. maybe I should specify that, what do you think?
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Hmmm, probably.
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K I shall try that
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Aw, I was hoping to read more of the story from your perspective. Having others join can sometimes make the story less organized and unified and can sometimes reduce the quality of the story. But that’s just my opinion. Can’t wait to read more. 
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wellm, maybe I could make it single perspective…
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That may be better.
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@PennyRose I love this! I like fiction based on the Bible but I always struggle with making something believable. And you did that! 
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yay! that was the point! to create a real picture in our mind when we read the biblical story. After this one I am planning on making more
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Same!
Btw, @PennyRose, just a little note, but you didn’t tell how you know David’s name. 
He didn’t introduce his name into the story at the beginning, yet Sarah told Peter that the boy’s name was David. Just something to watch out for when crafting stories.
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oh! forgot about that! thanks!
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I love your story, Abriss!! Please keep it single perspective, I love how you’re writing it!
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just to let everyone I am working on the next section. So please be patient with me
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okay I am still working
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Is this about David?
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